Broken Butterfly Page 6

PHEW! FCK Yeah! Page 6....

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Never thought I threw this one up today. It's... well.. It feels rushed. But... honestly, the picture aren't rushed, the pacing needs some adjustment. Story boarding is now based on sketches, not script anymore. And seriously, need more reference on wording, and SFX words. Maybe some look on Marvel comic or so so later on. Cuz they don't feel right.

Note:
1. Of course, now that the comic is getting a higher image quality, each of the gorrillas now has their own specific designs, and Li Wei gets a bit more expressions. And so does everyone else.

2. I know, some of the panels are difficult to see due to cramped details.. Yeah... It was really fun when it was in the drawing progress... Note to self... keep it simple next time.

3. The shading still needs some works. eventhough i painted them like what i did before, the result looks... unpleasant. So, the shading colors are actually lighter here. Might take a few more practice to adjustment.

4. Initially, there was a panel showing the entire level where Reaper is, but it was prove too difficult (too many things need to draw). So, in a short tour on the building again: Reaper is now at the second floor, where all of the sketch and plays take place, it's like a restaurant with a large stage. Li went passed 2nd floor and got into the 3rd floor. The fight with bull take place in the 3rd floor, a floor where visitors stay for the night. Yes, these two are literally bringing down the house.

5. The play where Reaper failed at.. was initially much more elaborated, and Reaper was involved in the fight along side Li up at the stage. Ninjas will be jumping all over from the ceiling to attack, while the audience still think its part of the act. Clapping their hands while Li and Reaper kick the ninja's butt. It will be VERY cool to have that going. However, the story can't continue after that. So it was dropped.

Any comments? Please and Thank you!