Broken Butterfly WIP 2

It's been a while since I put up the last broken Butterfly page. Yeah... the progress had been very slow till not moving at all.. And i had trouble piecing things together in a way I feel its logically acceptable. The main problem i had mostly with this comic, is that there is a difficulty in telling the time. Most of the things from the last page on, will run in parallel. This is the second time i run my comic this way - the first is in Home coming. And there's difficulty making this parallel character stories join up into one in the end: they had to be there at the same time, they know what's happening, they have similar goal to continue together (if not, it would be difficult to continue). There was a plot originally set down, but I have rescrapped them many times as the more i gone through them i just don't like it.

Anyhoo.. This is the scene where Xunsu fight her battle againts a really prideful ox. Who later turn out to be getting more than he can chew. It was supposed to be the "background actions". But I guess I got carried away, cuz fight scenes are very fun to draw. Some of this may or may not make it into the final.

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